Wednesday, May 26, 2010

School seizing cell phones raises questions


Eric Roberts understands why Westview Middle School officials confiscated his daughter's cell phone when she was caught with it turned on during school for the second time.


Whats better then raising questions about something? Understanding them before you actually ask a question. Interesting headline and lede here. "School seizing cells phones raises questions." Ok. I'm intrigued. What are those questions? Oh, whatever they are they are understood. I got it. This is standard procedure and practices for writing ledes. Let me try:

Rampant Outbreak of AIDS in Lowcountry Questioned

"Charlie understands that sex without condom might lead to STDs or Aids....now."

Perfect.



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