BY JILL COLEY
"Dog for a walk" is Smith Pruitt's mantra. The autistic 11-year-old boy points to Aubrey, a yellow Labrador retriever, as he repeats faster, "Dog for a walk."
Kudos and bonus points for using "mantra" in the lede. However, the author loses them as she forgot to capitalize "retriever." No points this round.
Sunday, April 12, 2009
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